Lesson 4 Revised Argument

The instructor ask for an evaluation of the supporting evidence I found for my revised claim

For the revised essay "Parenting Developmentally Delayed Twins:
Beyond the Multicultural Stress and the Willingness to Cope"

It was used as word cited the following documents:

• "Thoughts of a Silent Warrior: Secret Wounds and Numerous Rewards of an Ecuadorian Woman in Alaska.” 15 May 2010:1-3. Print. 26 June 2010. This is an essay that tell us about an immigrant struggling in Alaska, who is a single mother of twins with developmental delays. The writer experiences have many sad episodes that developed in Erika Acevedo sorrow, suicidal thoughts, and lack of coping skills with depression; however, her children build up strength for her. She decide to become an teacher aide and hopes one day work in the special education field.

• Delgado, Bettina Marissa. “Factors Related to Depression among Hispanic Women: Review of the Literature.” Record Details - ED389973. ERIC-Education Resource Information Center. “n.d.” PDF file. 26 Jun. 2010. She critizice the literature about Factors Related to Depression among Hispanic Woman that said is rarely common. Delgado research and compile an study presenting the characteristics of Hispanic Women life that are depressors. In adittion, she mention that is necessary future researchs on this topic considering that Hispanic Woman Depression could be different according with the country of origin.

• "Heritability of Autism." Wikipedia, The Free Encyclopedia. Wikimedia.12 June 2010. Web. 28 June 2010. " Your Family & Autism." Autism Speaks. Autism Speaks. Web. 27 Jun. 2010. The Wiki source talk about important facts about Autism, shows some true and false statements related with twining as factor of children autism. Its information is a first step for deeper researching that is been used for the revised essay "Parenting Developmentally Delayed Twins:Beyond the Multicultural Stress and the Willingness to Cope."