Who is the audience for you essay? What is the thesis of the essay? Does it include the claim and three supporting reasons to make it a strong thesis?
The Audience of my essay is parents of multicultural children of Alaska who must appreciate to know more about The Alaska Education Plan to reinforce parent involvement as part of student’s success in their educational career, and other topics related the quality of education itself.
The thesis: The mix population in Alaska brings numerous challenges in regards the student’s education vs. the quantity of qualified teachers that should meet the Alaskan needs. Most of the work-class schools are affected, and this is expensive for the Government to afford professionals to cover programs for children with learning delays, second language peers, and last but not less the portion of qualified individuals who are not in the position to complete the Masters degrees.
I believe it is a strong thesis and it has three supporting reasons that are in bold.
Friday, August 6, 2010
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